Have a proposal which needs some editing by following the comments in the attached file .

Have a proposal which needs some editing by following the comments in the attached file .

I have a proposal which needs some editing by following the comments in the attached file (Proporas The Right to Live …)

Edit the topic & research question to fit and match the comments in the filed mentioned. 

I want to have the overall proposal to be consistent & matching with the comments.

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